tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28898491.post116916800688038369..comments2023-10-30T06:39:27.052-07:00Comments on All I Have in the World: Poetry Thursday--LineChad Simpsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11085458343846938765noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28898491.post-1169230307002412362007-01-19T10:11:00.000-08:002007-01-19T10:11:00.000-08:00I like this a lot - I think you have done the line...I like this a lot - I think you have done the line justice here. You've more than just Spaghetti-O's (which I find horrifying, by the way), you have fine words. The last two lines are <I>perfect.</I>twilightspiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338205807151511143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28898491.post-1169214312976982652007-01-19T05:45:00.000-08:002007-01-19T05:45:00.000-08:00What a sweet poem. With his "humble" offering, I c...What a sweet poem. With his "humble" offering, I can see how much the narrator cares for the girl, presumably a girlfriend in this case rather than a daughter. Very nicely done.angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686166409869806810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28898491.post-1169179870037749772007-01-18T20:11:00.000-08:002007-01-18T20:11:00.000-08:00I can't believe you chose to write a soup-themed p...I can't believe you chose to write a soup-themed poem referencing my Spaghetti-O's habit while I chopped leeks, shallots, garlic and thyme for the "fine soup" I made for dinner. <BR/><BR/>And yet, I will stand by my beloved Spaghetti-O's in times of need. They take me back to sick days, white bread, doting grandmothers and The Price is Right.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com